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<para>
The LDP uses a number of scripts to distribute your document.
These scripts submit your document to the LDP's CVS (like a content
management system), and then they transform your document to other formats that
These scripts submit your document to the LDP's CVS (a free
document version management system), and then they transform your document to other formats that
users then read. Your document will also be mirrored on a number
of sites worldwide (yet another set of scripts).
</para>
<para>
In order for these scripts to work correctly, your document must
be both <quote>well formed</quote> (grammatically correct) use <quote>valid
markup</quote> (spell checked).
be both <quote>well formed</quote> and use <quote>valid
markup</quote>.
<emphasis>Well formed</emphasis> means your document follows the rules that XML
is expecting--this is the grammar part. <emphasis>Valid
is expectinging: it complies with XML grammar rules. <emphasis>Valid
markup</emphasis> means you only use elements or tags
which are <quote>valid</quote> for your
document--this is the spelling part.
document: XML vocubulary rules are applied.
</para>
<para>
If your document is not well formed, and valid, the
scripts will not be able to process your document. As
If your document is not well formed or uses invalid markup, the
scripts will not be able to process it. As
a result, your document will not be distributed.
</para>
<tip><para> There is more information about how to validate
<note><title>The Docbook Section</title><para> There is more information about how to validate
your document in the DocBook section. Check out <xref
linkend="tools-validate" /> for more help with validating
your document. </para></tip>
your document. </para></note>
</section>