diff --git a/LDP/guide/docbook/LDP-Author-Guide/validate-why.xml b/LDP/guide/docbook/LDP-Author-Guide/validate-why.xml
index 070d90f7..b2d0dcd6 100644
--- a/LDP/guide/docbook/LDP-Author-Guide/validate-why.xml
+++ b/LDP/guide/docbook/LDP-Author-Guide/validate-why.xml
@@ -6,31 +6,31 @@
 
 	<para>
 		The LDP uses a number of scripts to distribute your document.
-		These scripts submit your document to the LDP's CVS (like a content
-		management system), and then they transform your document to other formats that
+		These scripts submit your document to the LDP's CVS (a free 
+		document version management system), and then they transform your document to other formats that
 		users then read. Your document will also be mirrored on a number
 		of sites worldwide (yet another set of scripts).
 	</para>
 	
 	<para>
 		In order for these scripts to work correctly, your document must 
-		be both <quote>well formed</quote> (grammatically correct) use <quote>valid
-		markup</quote> (spell checked). 
+		be both <quote>well formed</quote> and use <quote>valid
+		markup</quote>. 
 		<emphasis>Well formed</emphasis> means your document follows the rules that XML
-		is expecting--this is the grammar part. <emphasis>Valid
+		is expectinging: it complies with XML grammar rules. <emphasis>Valid
 		markup</emphasis> means you only use elements or tags
 		which are <quote>valid</quote> for your
-		document--this is the spelling part. 
+		document: XML vocubulary rules are applied. 
 	</para>
 
 	<para>
-		If your document is not well formed, and valid, the
-		scripts will not be able to process your document. As
+		If your document is not well formed or uses invalid markup, the
+		scripts will not be able to process it. As
 		a result, your document will not be distributed.
 	</para>
 
-	<tip><para> There is more information about how to validate
+	<note><title>The Docbook Section</title><para> There is more information about how to validate
 	your document in the DocBook section. Check out <xref
 	linkend="tools-validate" /> for more help with validating
-	your document.	</para></tip>
+	your document.	</para></note>
 </section>