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<revhistory>
\layout SGML
<revision> <revnumber>Release 0.20.2</revnumber> <date>2002-02-05</date> <authorin
<revision> <revnumber>Release 0.20.3</revnumber> <date>2002-02-12</date> <authorin
itials>PB</authorinitials> <revremark>See
\begin_inset LatexCommand \ref[revision history]{revision-history}
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\layout Standard
A German translation is planned by me (German is my native language), but
it won't happen until the document change frequency is less than once/month
and when I get enough free time to do that.
it won't happen until the document's change frequency is less than once
per month, and I get enough free time to do it.
If you have more free time than me, please feel free to take over the translati
on!
\layout Subsection
@ -340,7 +340,8 @@ on!
To other languages
\layout Standard
Please wait until the document change frequency is less than once/month.
Please wait until the document's change frequency is less than once per
month.
\layout Section
Technical
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Some things first:
\layout Subsection
How many issues of a Linux & IPv6 related HOWTO are floating around?
How many versions of a Linux & IPv6 related HOWTO are floating around?
\layout Standard
Including this, there are three (3) HOWTO documents available.
Sorry, if that's too many ;-)
Apologies, if that is too many ;-)
\layout Subsubsection
Linux IPv6 FAQ/HOWTO (outdated)
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version
\series default
was 3.2.1 released 14.
Juli
July
\series bold
1997
\series default
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\layout Standard
There exists a second one called
There exists a second version called
\begin_inset LatexCommand \url[IPv6 & Linux - HowTo]{http://www.bieringer.de/linux/IPv6/}
\end_inset
@ -545,8 +546,8 @@ It was born
\series bold
maintain
\series default
it, but it will slowly fade in favor of the Linux IPv6 HOWTO you are reading
right this second.
it, but it will slowly fade in favour of the Linux IPv6 HOWTO you arecurrently
reading.
\layout Subsubsection
Linux IPv6 HOWTO (this document)
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\end_inset
) once IPv6 becomes more and more standard, I decided to write a new document
covering basic and advanced issues which will remain important over the
next years.
), and as IPv6 is becoming more and more standard, I decided to write a
new document covering basic and advanced issues which will remain important
over the next few years.
Dynamic content will be still found further on in the second HOWTO (
\begin_inset LatexCommand \url[IPv6 & Linux - HowTo]{http://www.bieringer.de/linux/IPv6/}
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Releases 0.x
\layout Description
0.20.3 2002-02-12/PB: Migrate a minor grammar check patch submitted by John
Ronan
\layout Description
0.20.2 2002-02-05/PB: Add mipl to maillist table
\layout Description
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Martin F.
Krafft <madduck at madduck dot net>: For grammar checks and general reviewing
of the document.
\layout Itemize
John Ronan <j0n at tssg dot wit dot ie>: For grammar checks.
\layout Subsection
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