diff --git a/LDP/users/Peter-Bieringer/Linux+IPv6-HOWTO.lyx b/LDP/users/Peter-Bieringer/Linux+IPv6-HOWTO.lyx
index a1645745..22e15f3e 100644
--- a/LDP/users/Peter-Bieringer/Linux+IPv6-HOWTO.lyx
+++ b/LDP/users/Peter-Bieringer/Linux+IPv6-HOWTO.lyx
@@ -49,7 +49,7 @@ on>
 <revhistory> 
 \layout SGML
 
-<revision> <revnumber>Release 0.20.2</revnumber> <date>2002-02-05</date> <authorin
+<revision> <revnumber>Release 0.20.3</revnumber> <date>2002-02-12</date> <authorin
 itials>PB</authorinitials> <revremark>See  
 \begin_inset LatexCommand \ref[revision history]{revision-history}
 
@@ -331,8 +331,8 @@ To German
 \layout Standard
 
 A German translation is planned by me (German is my native language), but
- it won't happen until the document change frequency is less than once/month
- and when I get enough free time to do that.
+ it won't happen until the document's change frequency is less than once
+ per  month, and I get enough free time to do it.
  If you have more free time than me, please feel free to take over the translati
 on!
 \layout Subsection
@@ -340,7 +340,8 @@ on!
 To other languages
 \layout Standard
 
-Please wait until the document change frequency is less than once/month.
+Please wait until the document's change frequency is less than once per
+ month.
 \layout Section
 
 Technical
@@ -460,11 +461,11 @@ Preface
 Some things first:
 \layout Subsection
 
-How many issues of a Linux & IPv6 related HOWTO are floating around?
+How many versions of a Linux & IPv6 related HOWTO are floating around?
 \layout Standard
 
 Including this, there are three (3) HOWTO documents available.
- Sorry, if that's too many ;-)
+ Apologies, if that is too many ;-)
 \layout Subsubsection
 
 Linux IPv6 FAQ/HOWTO (outdated)
@@ -489,7 +490,7 @@ Latest
 version
 \series default 
  was 3.2.1 released 14.
- Juli 
+ July 
 \series bold 
 1997
 \series default 
@@ -522,7 +523,7 @@ HowTo
 
 \layout Standard
 
-There exists a second one called 
+There exists a second version called 
 \begin_inset LatexCommand \url[IPv6 & Linux - HowTo]{http://www.bieringer.de/linux/IPv6/}
 
 \end_inset 
@@ -545,8 +546,8 @@ It was born
 \series bold 
 maintain 
 \series default 
-it, but it will slowly fade in favor of the Linux IPv6 HOWTO you are reading
- right this second.
+it, but it will slowly fade in favour of the Linux IPv6 HOWTO you arecurrently
+ reading.
 \layout Subsubsection
 
 Linux IPv6 HOWTO (this document)
@@ -578,9 +579,9 @@ Peter Bieringer
 
 \end_inset 
 
-) once IPv6 becomes more and more standard, I decided to write a new document
- covering basic and advanced issues which will remain important over the
- next years.
+), and as IPv6 is becoming more and more standard, I decided to write a
+ new  document covering basic and advanced issues which will remain important
+ over  the next few years.
  Dynamic content will be still found further on in the second HOWTO (
 \begin_inset LatexCommand \url[IPv6 & Linux - HowTo]{http://www.bieringer.de/linux/IPv6/}
 
@@ -8872,6 +8873,10 @@ Revision history
 Releases 0.x
 \layout Description
 
+0.20.3 2002-02-12/PB: Migrate a minor grammar check patch submitted by John
+ Ronan
+\layout Description
+
 0.20.2 2002-02-05/PB: Add mipl to maillist table
 \layout Description
 
@@ -9025,6 +9030,9 @@ s.
 Martin F.
  Krafft <madduck at madduck dot net>: For grammar checks and general reviewing
  of the document.
+\layout Itemize
+
+John Ronan <j0n at tssg dot wit dot ie>: For grammar checks.
 \layout Subsection
 
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