From fe10db363b4080cdde1177b83d7419385d1d3972 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Michael Kerrisk <mtk.manpages@gmail.com>
Date: Fri, 21 Nov 2008 17:43:46 -0500
Subject: [PATCH] udp.7: grfix

---
 man7/udp.7 | 19 +++++++++----------
 1 file changed, 9 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)

diff --git a/man7/udp.7 b/man7/udp.7
index b653190dc..8a7246653 100644
--- a/man7/udp.7
+++ b/man7/udp.7
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ or
 with a valid destination address as an argument.
 When
 .BR connect (2)
-is called on the socket the default destination address is set and
+is called on the socket, the default destination address is set and
 datagrams can now be sent using
 .BR send (2)
 or
@@ -41,7 +41,7 @@ address to
 .BR sendto (2)
 or
 .BR sendmsg (2).
-In order to receive packets the socket can be bound to a local
+In order to receive packets, the socket can be bound to a local
 address first by using
 .BR bind (2).
 Otherwise the socket layer will automatically assign
@@ -51,8 +51,8 @@ and bind the socket to
 .BR INADDR_ANY .
 
 All receive operations return only one packet.
-When the packet is smaller than the passed buffer only that much
-data is returned, when it is bigger the packet is truncated and the
+When the packet is smaller than the passed buffer, only that much
+data is returned; when it is bigger, the packet is truncated and the
 .B MSG_TRUNC
 flag is set.
 .B MSG_WAITALL
@@ -77,7 +77,7 @@ This means the kernel
 will keep track of the MTU to a specific target IP address and return
 .B EMSGSIZE
 when a UDP packet write exceeds it.
-When this happens the application should decrease the packet size.
+When this happens, the application should decrease the packet size.
 Path MTU discovery can be also turned off using the
 .B IP_MTU_DISCOVER
 socket option or the
@@ -85,9 +85,9 @@ socket option or the
 file; see
 .BR ip (7)
 for details.
-When turned off UDP will fragment outgoing UDP packets
+When turned off, UDP will fragment outgoing UDP packets
 that exceed the interface MTU.
-However disabling it is not recommended
+However, disabling it is not recommended
 for performance and reliability reasons.
 .SS "Address Format"
 UDP uses the IPv4
@@ -106,7 +106,7 @@ which don't pass any errors unless the socket is connected.
 Linux's behavior is mandated by
 .BR RFC\ 1122 .
 
-For compatibility with legacy code in Linux 2.0 and 2.2
+For compatibility with legacy code, in Linux 2.0 and 2.2
 it was possible to set the
 .B SO_BSDCOMPAT
 .B SOL_SOCKET
@@ -122,7 +122,7 @@ for further information.
 
 When the
 .B IP_RECVERR
-option is enabled all errors are stored in the socket error queue
+option is enabled, all errors are stored in the socket error queue,
 and can be received by
 .BR recvmsg (2)
 with the
@@ -148,7 +148,6 @@ portable.
 .\" #define UDP_ENCAP_ESPINUDP_NON_IKE      1 /* draft-ietf-ipsec-nat-t-ike-00/01 */
 .\" #define UDP_ENCAP_ESPINUDP      2 /* draft-ietf-ipsec-udp-encaps-06 */
 .\" #define UDP_ENCAP_L2TPINUDP     3 /* rfc2661 */
-
 .SS Ioctls
 These ioctls can be accessed using
 .BR ioctl (2).