Further improvements to recently changed leases text

man2/fcntl.2

@@ -53,7 +53,7 @@
 .\"	mtk: Noted F_SETOWN bug for socket file descriptor in Linux 2.4
 .\"	and earlier.  Added text on permissions required to send signal.
 .\"
-.TH FCNTL 2 2004-12-08 "Linux 2.6.9" "Linux Programmer's Manual"
+.TH FCNTL 2 2005-20-13 "Linux 2.6.14" "Linux Programmer's Manual"
 .SH NAME
 fcntl \- manipulate file descriptor
 .SH SYNOPSIS
@@ -535,7 +535,7 @@ the file referred to by
 .IR fd .
 A file lease provides a mechanism whereby the process holding
 the lease (the "lease holder") is notified (via delivery of a signal)
-when another process (the "lease breaker") tries to
+when a process (the "lease breaker") tries to
 .BR open (2)
 or
 .BR truncate (2)
@@ -551,7 +551,7 @@ values is specified in the integer
 .B F_RDLCK
 Take out a read lease.
 This will cause the calling process to be notified when
-another process opens the file for writing or truncates it.
+the file is opened for writing or is truncated.
 .\" The following became true in kernel 2.6.10:
 .\" See the man-pages-2.09 Changelog for further info.
 A read lease can only be placed on a file descriptor that 
@@ -559,8 +559,8 @@ is opened read-only.
 .TP
 .B F_WRLCK
 Take out a write lease.
-This will cause the caller to be notified when another process 
-opens the file (for reading or writing) or truncates it.
+This will cause the caller to be notified when 
+the file is opened for reading or writing or is truncated.
 A write lease may be placed on a file only if no other process
 currently has the file open.
 .TP
@@ -636,7 +636,7 @@ The default signal used to notify the lease holder is SIGIO,
 but this can be changed using the
 .B F_SETSIG
 command to
-.B fcntl ().
+.BR fcntl ().
 If a
 .B F_SETSIG
 command is performed (even one specifying SIGIO), and the signal