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Release 0.18 Modified Files: Linux+IPv6-HOWTO.sgml
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<affiliation><address> <email>pb (at) bieringer.de</email> </address> </affiliation>
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<revhistory>
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<revision> <revnumber>Release 0.18</revnumber> <date>2002-01-22</date> <authorinitials>PB</authorinitials> <revremark>See <link linkend="revision-history">revision history</link> for more</revremark></revision>
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<revision> <revnumber>Release 0.17</revnumber> <date>2002-01-19</date> <authorinitials>PB</authorinitials> <revremark>See <link linkend="revision-history">revision history</link> for more</revremark></revision>
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<revision> <revnumber>Release 0.16</revnumber> <date>2002-01-19</date> <authorinitials>PB</authorinitials> <revremark>See <link linkend="revision-history">revision history</link> for more</revremark></revision>
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<revision> <revnumber>Release 0.15</revnumber> <date>2002-01-15</date> <authorinitials>PB</authorinitials> <revremark>See <link linkend="revision-history">revision history</link> for more</revremark></revision>
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</revhistory>
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<abstract>
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<para>
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</title>
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<comment>
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“<” must be encoded using “&lt;” because of SGML export, otherwise this will be recognized as SGML tag, which isn't really one...
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CVS-ID: $Id: Linux+IPv6-HOWTO.lyx,v 1.1 2002/01/19 14:54:51 pbldp Exp $
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CVS-ID: $Id: Linux+IPv6-HOWTO.lyx,v 1.4 2002/01/22 07:59:48 pbldp Exp $
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</comment>
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<sect1 id="general-copright">
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<title>
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</para>
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</sect2>
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</sect1>
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<sect1>
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<title>
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Credits
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</title>
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<para>
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The quickest way to be added to this nice list is to send bug fixes, corrections, and/or updates to me ;-).
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</para>
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<para>
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If you want to do a major review, please ask the author for the native LyX file as diffs against SGML don't help too much.
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</para>
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<sect2>
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<title>
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Major credits
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</title>
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<itemizedlist>
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<listitem>
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<para>
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David Ranch <dranch at trinnet dot net>: For encouraging me to write this HOWTO, his editorial comments on the first few revisions, and his contributions to various IPv6 testing results on my IPv6 web site. Also for his major reviews and suggestions.
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</para>
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</listitem>
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<listitem>
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<para>
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Pekka Savola <pekkas at netcore dot fi>: For major reviews and suggestions.
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</para>
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</listitem>
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<listitem>
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<para>
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Martin F. Krafft <madduck at madduck dot net>: For grammar checks and general reviewing of the document.
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</para>
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</listitem>
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</itemizedlist>
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</sect2>
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<sect2>
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<title>
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Other credits
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</title>
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<sect3>
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<title>
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Document technique related
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</title>
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<para>
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Writing a LDP HOWTO as a newbie (in LyX and exporting this to DocBook to conform to SGML) isn't as easy as some people say. There are some strange pitfalls... Nevertheless, thanks to:
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</para>
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<itemizedlist>
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<listitem>
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<para>
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Authors of the <ulink url="http://www.linuxdoc.org/LDP/LDP-Author-Guide/">LDP Author Guide</ulink>
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</para>
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</listitem>
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<listitem>
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<para>
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B. Guillon: For his <ulink url="http://perso.libertysurf.fr/bgu/doc/db4lyx/">DocBook with LyX HOWTO</ulink>
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</para>
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</listitem>
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</itemizedlist>
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</sect3>
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<sect3>
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<title>
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Document content related
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<para>
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Are shown at the end of the document, see <link linkend="content-related-credits">here</link> for more.
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</para>
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</sect3>
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</sect2>
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</sect1>
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</chapter>
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<chapter id="chapter-basics">
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<title>
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<itemizedlist>
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<para>
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All Nodes Address: ID = 1h, addresses all hosts on the local node (ff01:0:0:0:0:0:1) or the connected link (ff02:0:0:0:0:0:1).
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All Nodes Address: ID = 1h, addresses all hosts on the local node (ff01:0:0:0:0:0:0:1) or the connected link (ff02:0:0:0:0:0:0:1).
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</para>
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</listitem>
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<listitem>
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<para>
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All Routers Address: ID = 2h, addresses all routers on the local node (ff01:0:0:0:0:0:2), on the connected link (ff02:0:0:0:0:0:2), or on the local site (ff05:0:0:0:0:0:2)
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All Routers Address: ID = 2h, addresses all routers on the local node (ff01:0:0:0:0:0:0:2), on the connected link (ff02:0:0:0:0:0:0:2), or on the local site (ff05:0:0:0:0:0:0:2)
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</para>
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ff02::1:ff00:1234
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</programlisting>
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Used prefix shows that this is a link-local multicast address. The suffix is generated from the destination address. In this example, a packet should be sent to address “fe80::1234”, but the network stack don't know the current layer 2 MAC address. It replaces the upper 104 bits with “ff02::1:ff00::/104” and let the least 24 bits exist. Such address is now used on-link to find the corresponding node which has to send a reply containing its layer 2 MAC address also.
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Used prefix shows that this is a link-local multicast address. The suffix is generated from the destination address. In this example, a packet should be sent to address “fe80::1234”, but the network stack don't know the current layer 2 MAC address. It replaces the upper 104 bits with “ff02:0:0:0:0:1:ff00::/104” and let the least 24 bits exist. Such address is now used on-link to find the corresponding node which has to send a reply containing its layer 2 MAC address also.
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</para>
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</sect3>
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</sect2>
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<title>
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Further information and URLs
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</title>
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<sect1>
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<sect1 id="information-books">
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<title>
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Paper printed books
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</title>
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See following URL for more: <ulink url="http://www.switch.ch/lan/ipv6/references.html">SWITCH IPv6 Pilot / References</ulink>
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</para>
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</sect1>
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<sect1>
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<sect1 id="information-onlineinformation">
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<title>
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Online information
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<itemizedlist>
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<listitem>
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<para>
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finger, nslookup, ping, traceroute, whois: <ulink url="http://www.cs-ipv6.lancs.ac.uk/ipv6/testing/">tUK IPv6 Resource Centre / The test page</ulink>
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finger, nslookup, ping, traceroute, whois: <ulink url="http://www.cs-ipv6.lancs.ac.uk/ipv6/testing/">UK IPv6 Resource Centre / The test page</ulink>
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</para>
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<listitem>
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</chapter>
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<chapter>
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<title>
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The End / Revision history
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The End / Revision history / Credits
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</title>
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<para>
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Thanks for reading. Hope it helps!
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<title>
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Releases 0.x
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</title>
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<comment>
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*wip* is a Work In Progress version, later a candidate for a new release
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</comment>
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<term>
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0.18
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</term><listitem><para>2002-01-22/PB: fix bugs in explanation of multicast address types
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</para>
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<varlistentry>
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<term>
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0.17.2
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</term><listitem><para>2002-01-22/PB: cosmetic fix double existing text in history (at 0.16), move all credits to the end of the document
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</para>
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<varlistentry>
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<term>
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0.17.1
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</term><listitem><para>2002-01-20/PB: add a reference, fix URL text in online-test-tools
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</para>
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<varlistentry>
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<term>
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0.17
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0.16
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</term><listitem><para>2002-01-19/PB: minor fixes, remove “bold” and “emphasize” formats on code lines, fix “too long unwrapped code lines” using selfmade utility, extend list of URLs.0.16 2002-01-19/PB: minor fixes, remove “bold” and “emphasize” formats on code lines, fix “too long unwrapped code lines” using selfmade utility, extend list of URLs.
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</term><listitem><para>2002-01-19/PB: minor fixes, remove “bold” and “emphasize” formats on code lines, fix “too long unwrapped code lines” using selfmade utility, extend list of URLs.
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</variablelist>
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</sect2>
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</sect1>
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<sect1 id="content-related-credits">
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<sect1 id="credits">
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<title>
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Content related credits
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Credits
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</title>
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<para>
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Credits for fixes and hints are listed here, will grow sure in the future
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The quickest way to be added to this nice list is to send bug fixes, corrections, and/or updates to me ;-).
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</para>
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<itemizedlist>
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<listitem>
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<para>
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S .P. Meenakshi <meena at cs dot iitm dot ernet dot in>: For a hint using a “send mail” shell program on tcp_wrapper/hosts.deny
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</para>
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</listitem>
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<listitem>
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<para>
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Georg Käfer <gkaefer at salzburg dot co dot at>: For detection of no proper PDF creation (fixed now by LDP maintainer Greg Ferguson) and some suggestions
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</para>
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</listitem>
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<listitem>
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<para>
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Frank Dinies <FrankDinies at web dot de>: For a bugfix on IPv6 address explanation
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</para>
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</listitem>
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</itemizedlist>
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<para>
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If you want to do a major review, please ask the author for the native LyX file as diffs against SGML don't help too much.
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</para>
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<sect2 id="major-credits">
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<title>
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Major credits
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</title>
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<itemizedlist>
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<listitem>
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<para>
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David Ranch <dranch at trinnet dot net>: For encouraging me to write this HOWTO, his editorial comments on the first few revisions, and his contributions to various IPv6 testing results on my IPv6 web site. Also for his major reviews and suggestions.
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</para>
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</listitem>
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<listitem>
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<para>
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Pekka Savola <pekkas at netcore dot fi>: For major reviews and suggestions.
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</para>
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</listitem>
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<listitem>
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<para>
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Martin F. Krafft <madduck at madduck dot net>: For grammar checks and general reviewing of the document.
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</para>
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</listitem>
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</itemizedlist>
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</sect2>
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<sect2>
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<title>
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Other credits
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</title>
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<sect3>
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<title>
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Document technique related
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</title>
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<para>
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Writing a LDP HOWTO as a newbie (in LyX and exporting this to DocBook to conform to SGML) isn't as easy as some people say. There are some strange pitfalls... Nevertheless, thanks to:
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</para>
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<itemizedlist>
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<listitem>
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<para>
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Authors of the <ulink url="http://www.linuxdoc.org/LDP/LDP-Author-Guide/">LDP Author Guide</ulink>
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</para>
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</listitem>
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<listitem>
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<para>
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B. Guillon: For his <ulink url="http://perso.libertysurf.fr/bgu/doc/db4lyx/">DocBook with LyX HOWTO</ulink>
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</para>
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</listitem>
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</itemizedlist>
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</sect3>
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<sect3 id="content-related-credits">
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<title>
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Content related credits
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</title>
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<para>
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Credits for fixes and hints are listed here, will grow sure in the future
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</para>
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<itemizedlist>
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<listitem>
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<para>
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S .P. Meenakshi <meena at cs dot iitm dot ernet dot in>: For a hint using a “send mail” shell program on tcp_wrapper/hosts.deny
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</para>
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</listitem>
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<listitem>
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<para>
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Georg Käfer <gkaefer at salzburg dot co dot at>: For detection of no proper PDF creation (fixed now by LDP maintainer Greg Ferguson) and some suggestions
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</para>
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</listitem>
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<listitem>
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<para>
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Frank Dinies <FrankDinies at web dot de>: For a bugfix on IPv6 address explanation
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</para>
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</listitem>
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<listitem>
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<para>
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John Freed <jfreed at linux-mag dot com>: For finding a bug in in IPv6 multicast address explanation
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</para>
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</itemizedlist>
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</sect3>
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</sect2>
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