Minor fix and move of all "credits" to end of document

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	Linux+IPv6-HOWTO.lyx
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<revhistory>
\layout SGML
<revision> <revnumber>Release 0.17.1</revnumber> <date>2002-01-20</date> <authorin
<revision> <revnumber>Release 0.17.2</revnumber> <date>2002-01-22</date> <authorin
itials>PB</authorinitials> <revremark>See
\begin_inset LatexCommand \ref[revision history]{revision-history}
@ -690,74 +690,6 @@ Linux operating system compatible hardware
Surely you want to run some tests too, not only read this HOWTO and fall
asleep here and there.
:)
\layout Section
Credits
\layout Standard
The quickest way to be added to this nice list is to send bug fixes, corrections
, and/or updates to me ;-).
\layout Standard
If you want to do a major review, please ask the author for the native LyX
file as diffs against SGML don't help too much.
\layout Subsection
Major credits
\layout Itemize
David Ranch <dranch at trinnet dot net>: For encouraging me to write this
HOWTO, his editorial comments on the first few revisions, and his contributions
to various IPv6 testing results on my IPv6 web site.
Also for his major reviews and suggestions.
\layout Itemize
Pekka Savola <pekkas at netcore dot fi>: For major reviews and suggestions.
\layout Itemize
Martin F.
Krafft <madduck at madduck dot net>: For grammar checks and general reviewing
of the document.
\layout Subsection
Other credits
\layout Subsubsection
Document technique related
\layout Standard
Writing a LDP HOWTO as a newbie (in LyX and exporting this to DocBook to
conform to SGML) isn't as easy as some people say.
There are some strange pitfalls...
Nevertheless, thanks to:
\layout Itemize
Authors of the
\begin_inset LatexCommand \url[LDP Author Guide]{http://www.linuxdoc.org/LDP/LDP-Author-Guide/}
\end_inset
\layout Itemize
B.
Guillon: For his
\begin_inset LatexCommand \url[DocBook with LyX HOWTO]{http://perso.libertysurf.fr/bgu/doc/db4lyx/}
\end_inset
\layout Subsubsection
Document content related
\layout Standard
Are shown at the end of the document, see
\begin_inset LatexCommand \ref[here]{content-related-credits}
\end_inset
for more.
\layout Chapter
@ -7878,7 +7810,7 @@ Another source is
.
\layout Chapter
The End / Revision history
The End / Revision history / Credits
\layout Standard
Thanks for reading.
@ -7896,7 +7828,11 @@ Revision history
Releases 0.x
\layout Description
0.17.1 2002-01-20/PB: add a reference, fix URL text in onlinetesttools
0.17.2 2002-01-22/PB: cosmetic fix double existing text in history (at 0.16),
move all credits to the end of the document
\layout Description
0.17.1 2002-01-20/PB: add a reference, fix URL text in online-test-tools
\layout Description
0.17 2002-01-19/PB: add some forgotten information and URLs about global
@ -7923,31 +7859,6 @@ emphasize
\begin_inset Quotes sld
\end_inset
too long unwrapped code lines
\begin_inset Quotes srd
\end_inset
using selfmade utility, extend list of URLs.0.16 2002-01-19/PB: minor fixes,
remove
\begin_inset Quotes sld
\end_inset
bold
\begin_inset Quotes srd
\end_inset
and
\begin_inset Quotes sld
\end_inset
emphasize
\begin_inset Quotes srd
\end_inset
formats on code lines, fix
\begin_inset Quotes sld
\end_inset
too long unwrapped code lines
\begin_inset Quotes srd
\end_inset
@ -7994,6 +7905,73 @@ addresses
\layout Section
\begin_inset LatexCommand \label{credits}
\end_inset
Credits
\layout Standard
The quickest way to be added to this nice list is to send bug fixes, corrections
, and/or updates to me ;-).
\layout Standard
If you want to do a major review, please ask the author for the native LyX
file as diffs against SGML don't help too much.
\layout Subsection
\begin_inset LatexCommand \label{major-credits}
\end_inset
Major credits
\layout Itemize
David Ranch <dranch at trinnet dot net>: For encouraging me to write this
HOWTO, his editorial comments on the first few revisions, and his contributions
to various IPv6 testing results on my IPv6 web site.
Also for his major reviews and suggestions.
\layout Itemize
Pekka Savola <pekkas at netcore dot fi>: For major reviews and suggestions.
\layout Itemize
Martin F.
Krafft <madduck at madduck dot net>: For grammar checks and general reviewing
of the document.
\layout Subsection
Other credits
\layout Subsubsection
Document technique related
\layout Standard
Writing a LDP HOWTO as a newbie (in LyX and exporting this to DocBook to
conform to SGML) isn't as easy as some people say.
There are some strange pitfalls...
Nevertheless, thanks to:
\layout Itemize
Authors of the
\begin_inset LatexCommand \url[LDP Author Guide]{http://www.linuxdoc.org/LDP/LDP-Author-Guide/}
\end_inset
\layout Itemize
B.
Guillon: For his
\begin_inset LatexCommand \url[DocBook with LyX HOWTO]{http://perso.libertysurf.fr/bgu/doc/db4lyx/}
\end_inset
\layout Subsubsection
\begin_inset LatexCommand \label{content-related-credits}
\end_inset