diff --git a/LDP/ldpwn/20031029.xml b/LDP/ldpwn/20031029.xml
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@@ -25,9 +25,9 @@
A lot of new documents this week for review:
-Manoj Warrier sent in the first submission of his Scientific computing on GNU/Linux using free software HOWTO, which is already available from SourceForge.
+Manoj Warrier sent in the first submission of his Scientific computing on GNU/Linux using free software HOWTO, which is already available from Sourceforge.
-Another first submission, this one from Thomas Miglinci, is the SIMpad HOWTO, dealing with the installation and configuration of Linux on the Siemens Webtablett.
+Another first submission, this one from Thomas Miglinci, is the SIMpad HOWTO, dealing with the installation and configuration of Linux on the Siemens Web Tablet.
And yet another first-timer: the Linux Kernel 0.01 Commentary, by Pramode C.E.
@@ -73,7 +73,7 @@ software for speech recognition.
Rick Moen added a couple more LUGs to his list, the Linux User Group HOWTO is now at v1.7.2.
The Bangla HOWTO is a joint effort of Taneem Ahmed, Santanu Chatterjee, Progga and Sayamindu Dasgupta, explaining how to add Bengali (Bangla) support on your GNU/Linux. v1.1.3 now.
-Daniel Quintiliani's Windows Newsreaders under Linux HOWTO v2.01 contains a lot of corrections and a promise to add more newsreaders to this document.
+Daniel Quintiliani's Windows Newsreaders under Linux HOWTO v2.01 contains a lot of corrections and a promise to add more news readers to this document.
For making an informed decision on buying a SPARC
machine for Linux, we have the SPARC HOWTO, modestly versioned v0.0.5, by Lionel, trollhunter Bouchpan-Lerust-Juéry
.