language updates based on Martin's review

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<book id="index">
<bookinfo>
<title>LDP Author Guide</title>
<pubdate>2003-01-04</pubdate>
<pubdate>2003-01-05</pubdate>
<author>
<firstname>Mark</firstname>
<othername>F.</othername>

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<para>
Once your document has passed both the technical and language reviews,
you may submit it by following the instructions in <xref
linkend="ag-submit" />.
linkend="submission" />.
</para>
<para>

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</section>
<section id="doc-components">
<title>Document Components</title>
<section id="tools-compile">
<title>Compiling the sources</title>
<indexterm>
<primary>tools</primary>
<secondary>compiling the sources</secondary>
</indexterm>
<para>The <command>compiles-sgml</command> script is a set
of grouped
commands. As parameters, use the
<glossterm><acronym>SGML</acronym></glossterm> file and
the output format you want.
</para>
<para>The script included below supports the following
formats: <glossterm><acronym>XML</acronym></glossterm>,
<glossterm><acronym>HTML</acronym></glossterm>,
TeX, <glossterm><acronym>RTF</acronym></glossterm>,
<glossterm>PS</glossterm>, <glossterm>DVI</glossterm>
and mirrored PS, ideal for the creation of photo
lithographs.</para>
<para>The generation of the index is made automatically by
the script <filename>collateindex.pl</filename><footnote>
<para>More information about indexes are available
at <ulink
url="http://nwalsh.com/docbook/dsssl/doc/indexing.html">the
page about index of Norman Walsh</ulink>.</para> </footnote>,
which should be installed in your system. </para>
<para>Besides the commands below, which generate the
outputs in different formats, there are other tools from
<trademark>Cygnus</trademark> for making the direct
conversion. The tools can be obtained from <ulink
url="http://sourceware.cygnus.com/docbook-tools/">Cygnus</ulink>.</para>
<para>You can <ulink
url="compiles-sgml">download the compile script</ulink> as well
as a version of <ulink
url="collateindex.pl"><filename>collateindex.pl</filename></ulink>.</para>
<indexterm>
<primary>tools</primary> <secondary>compiling
sources</secondary> <tertiary>compile-sgml</tertiary>
</indexterm>
<para>A similar script can be modified by creating
a <filename>Makefile</filename> and optimizing some
functions.</para>
</section>
<title>Formatting Documents</title>
<section id="toc-articles">
<title>Inserting a summary on the initial articles page</title>

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@ -563,7 +563,7 @@ structured data, by using querying languages for XML (<application>XPath</applic
<para>Such markups will be processed afterwards by an external
tool and will generate the index. An example of such a
tool is the <filename>collateindex.pl</filename> script
(see <xref linkend="tools-compile"/>). Details about the
(see <xref linkend="automatic-indexes"/>). Details about the
process used to generate these indexes are shown in <xref
linkend="automatic-indexes"/>.</para>