From a680dfbe752e978c38598fd4780379f809534945 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: pbldp <>
Date: Sun, 13 Apr 2003 15:57:41 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] Fix some typos, add a note about French translation in
 progress

---
 .../Peter-Bieringer/Linux+IPv6-HOWTO.lyx      | 69 +++++++++++++------
 1 file changed, 48 insertions(+), 21 deletions(-)

diff --git a/LDP/users/Peter-Bieringer/Linux+IPv6-HOWTO.lyx b/LDP/users/Peter-Bieringer/Linux+IPv6-HOWTO.lyx
index 0017d2f5..20a4ab85 100644
--- a/LDP/users/Peter-Bieringer/Linux+IPv6-HOWTO.lyx
+++ b/LDP/users/Peter-Bieringer/Linux+IPv6-HOWTO.lyx
@@ -52,6 +52,24 @@ Bieringer
 <revhistory> 
 \layout SGML
 
+<revision> <revnumber>Release 0.41.2</revnumber> <date>2003-04-13</date> <authorin
+itials>PB</authorinitials> <revremark>See  
+\begin_inset LatexCommand \ref[revision history]{revision-history}
+
+\end_inset 
+
+ for more</revremark></revision>
+\layout SGML
+
+<revision> <revnumber>Release 0.41.1</revnumber> <date>2003-03-31</date> <authorin
+itials>PB</authorinitials> <revremark>See  
+\begin_inset LatexCommand \ref[revision history]{revision-history}
+
+\end_inset 
+
+ for more</revremark></revision>
+\layout SGML
+
 <revision> <revnumber>Release 0.41</revnumber> <date>2003-03-22</date> <authorini
 tials>PB</authorinitials> <revremark>See  
 \begin_inset LatexCommand \ref[revision history]{revision-history}
@@ -70,15 +88,6 @@ tials>PB</authorinitials> <revremark>See
  for more</revremark></revision>
 \layout SGML
 
-<revision> <revnumber>Release 0.39.2</revnumber> <date>2003-02-10</date> <authorin
-itials>GK</authorinitials> <revremark>See  
-\begin_inset LatexCommand \ref[revision history]{revision-history}
-
-\end_inset 
-
- for more</revremark></revision>
-\layout SGML
-
 <revision> <revnumber>Release 0.39</revnumber> <date>2003-01-13</date> <authorini
 tials>PB</authorinitials> <revremark>See  
 \begin_inset LatexCommand \ref[revision history]{revision-history}
@@ -308,6 +317,9 @@ Major history
 \layout Standard
 
 2003-02-10: German translation is available
+\layout Standard
+
+2003-04-09: French translation is in progress
 \layout Subsubsection
 
 Full history
@@ -385,6 +397,13 @@ With 2002-11-10 a German translation was started by Georg K
 \end_inset 
 
 .
+\layout Subsubsection
+
+French
+\layout Standard
+
+With 2003-04-09 a French translation was started and is still in progress
+ by Michel Boucey <mboucey at free dot fr>.
 \layout Section
 
 Technical
@@ -1181,7 +1200,9 @@ compact
 
 \end_inset 
 
- (written 1996), never seen in the wild, but here is an example: 
+ (published on 1.
+ April 1996), never seen in the wild, probably an April fool's joke, but
+ here is an example: 
 \layout Code
 
 # ipv6calc --addr_to_base85 3ffe:ffff:0100:f101:0210:a4ff:fee3:9566 
@@ -6618,7 +6639,7 @@ Node wants to configure its global address
 Neighbor discovery solicitation for looking for host or gateway
 \layout Itemize
 
-Note wants to send packages to 
+Node wants to send packages to 
 \begin_inset Quotes sld
 \end_inset 
 
@@ -6691,7 +6712,7 @@ Since starting writing the
  Nowadays there exists a set of configuration and script files which do
  the job very well (never heard about real problems, but I don't know how
  many use the set).
- Because this configuration and scrips files are extended from time to time,
+ Because this configuration and script files are extended from time to time,
  they got their own HOWTO page: 
 \begin_inset LatexCommand \url[IPv6-HOWTO/scripts/current]{http://www.bieringer.de/linux/IPv6/IPv6-HOWTO/scripts/current/}
 
@@ -9513,7 +9534,7 @@ More Information can be found here:
 \layout Itemize
 
 
-\begin_inset LatexCommand \url[Draft / Advanced Sockets API for IPv6]{http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-ipngwg-rfc2292bis-08.txt}
+\begin_inset LatexCommand \url[Draft / Advanced Sockets API for IPv6 / draft-ietf-ipngwg-rfc2292bis-XY.txt]{http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/}
 
 \end_inset 
 
@@ -10938,14 +10959,6 @@ Testing Experimental IPv6 Technology and Services in Hungary
 \layout Itemize
 
 
-\begin_inset LatexCommand \url[The Quality of Service Forum site]{http://www.qosforum.com/tech_resources.htm}
-
-\end_inset 
-
-
-\layout Itemize
-
-
 \begin_inset LatexCommand \url[internet || site]{http://www.internet2.org/}
 
 \end_inset 
@@ -14036,6 +14049,13 @@ Versions x.y.z are work-in-progress and only published as LyX file on CVS.
 Releases 0.x
 \layout Description
 
+0.41.2 2003-04-13/PB: Fix some typos, add a note about a French translation
+ is in progress
+\layout Description
+
+0.41.1 2003-03-31/PB: Remove a broken URL, fix another
+\layout Description
+
 0.41 2003-03-22/PB: Add URLof German translation
 \layout Description
 
@@ -14449,6 +14469,13 @@ Stephane Bortzmeyer <bortzmeyer at nic dot fr>: Contributing persistent
 
 lithis von saturnsys <lithis at saturnsys dot com>: Reporting a misaddressed
  URL
+\layout Itemize
+
+Guy Hulbert <gwhulbert at rogers dot com>: Send a note that RFC1924 is probably
+ an April fool's joke
+\layout Itemize
+
+Michel Boucey <mboucey at free dot fr>: Finding typos
 \layout Section
 
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