diff --git a/LDP/ldpwn/20041117.xml b/LDP/ldpwn/20041117.xml
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--- a/LDP/ldpwn/20041117.xml
+++ b/LDP/ldpwn/20041117.xml
@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@
 
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-<listitem><para>Noel Llopis wrote a mini-HOWTO on improving fonts on Mandrake (but his general ideas works on any distribution with KDE).  The  document is up for review at <ulink url="http://convexhull.com/mandrake_fonts.html">http://convexhull.com/mandrake_fonts.html</ulink> and would be submitted to the LDP for inclusion in its collection.  </para></listitem>
+<listitem><para>Noel Llopis wrote a mini-HOWTO on improving fonts on Mandrake (but his ideas are general and work on any distribution with KDE).  The  document is up for review at <ulink url="http://convexhull.com/mandrake_fonts.html">http://convexhull.com/mandrake_fonts.html</ulink> and would be submitted to the LDP for inclusion in its collection.  </para></listitem>
 
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@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@
 
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-<listitem><para>David S.Lawyer sent in updates to the documents that he maintains:
+<listitem><para>David S. Lawyer sent in updates to the documents that he maintains:
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 	<listitem><para>The <ulink url="http://tldp.org/HOWTO/Modem-HOWTO.html">Modem-HOWTO</ulink> v0.34 has information on distinctive ring workaround where you want the modem to answer phone calls only for certain types of rings like long, short, long, short, etc.</para></listitem>
 	<listitem><para>The v1.11 of <ulink url="http://tldp.org/HOWTO/Plug-and-Play-HOWTO.html">Plug-and-Play-HOWTO</ulink> has a new sub-section on LPC bus in the "How do I Find Devices and How Are They Configured?" section.</para></listitem>
@@ -40,7 +40,7 @@
 
 <listitem><para>Mendel Cooper did a few minor updates to his <ulink url="http://www.tldp.org/LDP/abs/html/">Advanced Bash-Scripting Guide</ulink> and released v3.1.</para></listitem>
 
-<listitem><para>Artemiy I. Pavlov's <ulink url="http://tldp.org/HOWTO/SquashFS-HOWTO/">SquashFS HOWTO</ulink> v1.6 has been changed to catchup with the SquashFS release 2.0.  There are few minor text corrections as well.</para></listitem>
+<listitem><para>Artemiy I. Pavlov's <ulink url="http://tldp.org/HOWTO/SquashFS-HOWTO/">SquashFS HOWTO</ulink> v1.6 has been changed to catch-up with the SquashFS release 2.0.  There are few minor text corrections as well.</para></listitem>
 
 <listitem><para>Ram Samudrala submitted v1.31 of his <ulink url="http://tldp.org/HOWTO/Cluster-HOWTO.html">Linux Cluster HOWTO</ulink>.  The document discusses setting up high-performance Linux computing clusters.</para></listitem>
 
@@ -59,7 +59,7 @@
 
 <para>The LDP review process</para>
 
-<para>A lot of people had complaints that The LDPs review processes were getting in the way of new documents making their way into the collection.  People suggested watermarking documents that have been reviewed (or the opposite) and distinguishing between the documents that have been through the review process and the documents that have not been.</para>
+<para>A lot of people had complaints that The LDP's review processes were getting in the way of new documents making their way into the collection.  People suggested watermarking documents that have been reviewed (or the opposite) and distinguishing between the documents that have been through the review process and the documents that have not been.</para>
 
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