diff --git a/LDP/ldpwn/20030810.xml b/LDP/ldpwn/20030810.xml
index f0a02956..25680def 100644
--- a/LDP/ldpwn/20030810.xml
+++ b/LDP/ldpwn/20030810.xml
@@ -51,7 +51,7 @@
 <listitem><para>The <ulink url="http://tldp.org/HOWTO/Kernel-HOWTO/">Linux Kernel HOWTO</ulink>, v6.5 was sent in by Alavoor Vasudevan.</para></listitem>
 <listitem><para>David Lawyer is still updating the <ulink url="http://tldp.org/HOWTO/Modem-HOWTO.html">Modem HOWTO</ulink>, in order to help all those who can't have fast access yet; it's now at v0.29.</para></listitem>
 <listitem><para>Rick Moen sent in v1.6.3 of the <ulink url="http://tldp.org/HOWTO/User-Group-HOWTO.html">Linux User Group HOWTO.</para></listitem>
-<listitem><para>And Håvard Stranden's <ulink url="http://tldp.org/HOWTO/XFree86-R200/">ATI R200 + XFree86 4.x mini-HOWTO</ulink> is now availabl in v1.3.</para></listitem>
+<listitem><para>And Håvard Stranden's <ulink url="http://tldp.org/HOWTO/XFree86-R200/">ATI R200 + XFree86 4.x mini-HOWTO</ulink> is now available in v1.3.</para></listitem>
 <listitem><para>Miroslav Skoric updated his <ulink url="http://tldp.org/HOWTO/FBB.html">FBB mini-HOWTO.</para></listitem>
 <listitem><para>Eric S. Raymond sent in an update for the <ulink url="http://tldp.org/HOWTO/Linksys-Blue-Box-Router-HOWTO/">Linksys Blue Box Router HOWTO</ulink>.</para></listitem>
 <listitem><para>Gerardo Arnaez presented v2.2 of the <ulink url="http://tldp.org/HOWTO/Medicine-HOWTO/">Linux Medicine HOWTO</ulink>.</para></listitem>
@@ -121,7 +121,7 @@ wholeheartedly that I'm a stronger writer for it, so why stop now? :D
 <para>Q: What do you think is the single most needed improvement for TLDP?</para>
 <para>A: <quote>I'll stand my ground and say it would have to be an online editor for
 authors.  It should provide a simple way for authors to choose the
-version of markup they wish to use, and help them progess through
+version of markup they wish to use, and help them progress through
 creation of their document in a logical format, based on the LDP
 documentation templates.  Ideally, this system would parse and validate,
 provide suggestions for errors, and allow for a browser preview no
@@ -148,28 +148,13 @@ valuable to everyone.  Dream big!</quote></para>
 <sect1>
 <title>Happenings in the LDP world</title>
 
-<para>.</para>
-
 <sect2>
-<title>Title1</title>
+<title>We make free documentation</title>
 
-<para>.</para>
+<para>A very long and at times tiresome discussion about who can or can not use TLDP documents dominated the past two weeks.  You can read the entire thread <ulink url="http://lists.tldp.org/index.cgi?1:mss:4905:200308:nndilkkmnocimdnhjmkm">here</ulink>.  Summarized, it comes down to this: everybody can read our docs and store them on their servers, in accordance with the GPL.  This includes also people we don't like.</para>
 
 </sect2>
 
-<sect2>
-<title>Title2</title>
-
-<para>.</para>
-
-</sect2>
-
-<sect2>
-<title>Title3</title>
-
-<para>.</para>
-
-</sect2>
 </sect1>
 
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