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   <title>The Linux Documentation Project Weekly News</title>
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-<title>Documents submitted for review</title>
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-<para>All submissions have been processed.</para>
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-<listitem><para>David S. Lawyer cleaned out the <ulink url="http://tldp.org/HOWTO/Plug-and-Play-HOWTO.html">Plug-and-Play HOWTO</ulink>.  v1.08 presents more clarity in the explanations, corrections of obsolete statements and an intro on hot pluggable devices and USB.</para></listitem>
+<listitem><para>David S. Lawyer cleaned up the <ulink url="http://tldp.org/HOWTO/Plug-and-Play-HOWTO.html">Plug-and-Play HOWTO</ulink>.  v1.08 clarifies certain explanations, corrects of obsolete statements and has an introduction on hot pluggable devices and USB.</para></listitem>
 
 <listitem><para>v1.0.3 of the <ulink url="http://tldp.org/HOWTO/openMosix-HOWTO/">openMosix HOWTO</ulink> by Kris Buytaert has minor corrections.</para></listitem>
 
-<listitem><para>The guys and girls from <ulink url="http://www.traduc.org/">traduc.org</ulink> finished translating the <ulink url="http://www.traduc.org/docs/HOWTO/lecture/Hardware-HOWTO.html">Hardware HOWTO into French</ulink>.</para></listitem>
+<listitem><para>The folks from <ulink url="http://www.traduc.org/">traduc.org</ulink> finished translating the <ulink url="http://www.traduc.org/docs/HOWTO/lecture/Hardware-HOWTO.html">Hardware HOWTO into French</ulink>.</para></listitem>
 
 <listitem><para>The <ulink url="http://www.tldp.org/LDP/intro-linux/html/">Introduction to Linux Guide</ulink> v1.14, by Machtelt Garrels, has an extended chapter about I/O redirection and more about Linux groups and related commands.  Apart from the new topics, it also contains minor corrections and an updated glossary.</para></listitem>
 
+<listitem><para>Miroslav "Misko" Skoric sent in his updates to the <ulink url="http://tldp.org/HOWTO/FBB.html">FBB Packet-radio BBS mini-HOWTO</ulink>, the <ulink url="http://tldp.org/HOWTO/LILO.html">LILO mini-HOWTO</ulink> and the <ulink url="http://tldp.org/HOWTO/Linux+WinNT.html">Linux+WindowsNT mini-HOWTO</ulink>. </para></listitem>
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 <para>Getting ready for LSM</para>
 
-<para>Jean-Philippe Gu&#233;rard let us know that members of the <ulink url="http://traduc.org/">Traduc.org team</ulink> will be attending the <ulink url="http://www.libresoftwaremeeting.org">5th Libre Software Meeting</ulink> from 6 to 10 July.  He also hopes that this will be an occasion to tighten the relationship with TLDP and to replace the dead <ulink url="http://fr.tldp.org/">fr.tldp.org</ulink> project with Traduc, the currently official French translation effort.</para>
+<para>Jean-Philippe Gu&#233;rard let us know that members of the <ulink url="http://traduc.org/">Traduc.org team</ulink> will be attending the <ulink url="http://www.libresoftwaremeeting.org">5th Libre Software Meeting</ulink> from 6 to 10 July.  He also hopes that this will be an occasion to strengthen the relationship with TLDP and to replace the dead <ulink url="http://fr.tldp.org/">fr.tldp.org</ulink> project with Traduc, the currently active French translation effort.</para>
 
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 <para>New mirror sites</para>
 
-<para>This is like the baby-boom, but with Linux now.  The whole of Texas is appearantly running Linux now, and Canada is on their heels:</para>
+<para>This is like the baby-boom, but with Linux now.  The whole of Texas is apparently running Linux now, and Canada is on their heels:</para>
 
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 <listitem><para><ulink url="http://tldp.mirrors.activenodes.com/" />: set up by Eduardo Valdes in Toronto, Canada;</para></listitem>
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