Post TLDP (Tabatha) review.

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September 24, 2003

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<revhistory>
<revision>
<revnumber>1.0</revnumber>
<date>2003-09-24</date>
<authorinitials>MAB</authorinitials>
<revremark>reviewed and approved by TLDP</revremark>
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</revision>
<revision>
<revnumber>0.7</revnumber>
<date>2002-09-14</date>
<date>2003-09-14</date>
<authorinitials>MAB</authorinitials>
<revremark>incremental revisions, proofreading, ready for TLDP</revremark>
</revision>
<revision>
<revnumber>0.6</revnumber>
<date>2002-09-09</date>
<date>2003-09-09</date>
<authorinitials>MAB</authorinitials>
<revremark>minor editing, corrections from Stef Coene</revremark>
</revision>
<revision>
<revnumber>0.5</revnumber>
<date>2002-09-01</date>
<date>2003-09-01</date>
<authorinitials>MAB</authorinitials>
<revremark>HTB section mostly complete, more diagrams, LARTC pre-release</revremark>
</revision>
<revision>
<revnumber>0.4</revnumber>
<date>2002-08-30</date>
<date>2003-08-30</date>
<authorinitials>MAB</authorinitials>
<revremark>added diagram</revremark>
</revision>
<revision>
<revnumber>0.3</revnumber>
<date>2002-08-29</date>
<date>2003-08-29</date>
<authorinitials>MAB</authorinitials>
<revremark>substantial completion of classless, software, rules,
elements and components sections</revremark>
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<revision>
<revnumber>0.2</revnumber>
<date>2002-08-23</date>
<date>2003-08-23</date>
<authorinitials>MAB</authorinitials>
<revremark>major work on overview, elements, components and
software sections</revremark>
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<revision>
<revnumber>0.1</revnumber>
<date>2002-08-15</date>
<date>2003-08-15</date>
<authorinitials>MAB</authorinitials>
<revremark>initial revision (outline complete)</revremark>
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traffic control.
</para>
<para>
I assume that the reader is comfortable with Unix concepts and the
I assume that the reader is comfortable with UNIX concepts and the
command line and has a basic knowledge of IP networking. Users who wish
to implement traffic control may require the ability to patch, compile
and install a kernel or software package