Review by Tabatha is complete; HOWTO is ready for release.

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<pubdate>&pubdate;</pubdate>
<copyright>
<year>2003</year>
<holder>Martin A. Brown</holder>
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<para>&#x00A9; 2003, Martin A. Brown</para>
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<para>Permission is granted to copy, distribute and/or modify this document under the terms of the GNU Free Documentation License, Version 1.1 or any later version published by the Free Software Foundation; with no invariant sections, with no Front-Cover Texts, with no Back-Cover Text. A copy of the license is located at <ulink url="http://www.gnu.org/licenses/fdl.html">www.gnu.org/copyleft/fdl.html</ulink>.</para>
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<revnumber>1.0</revnumber>
<date>2003-04-16</date>
<authorinitials>tab</authorinitials>
<revremark>Initial Release, reviewed by LDP</revremark>
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<date>2002-04-01</date>
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<section id="intro">
<title>Introduction</title>
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(<ulink url="http://tcng.sourceforge.net">Traffic Control Next
Generation</ulink>) with HTB
(<ulink url="http://luxik.cdi.cz/~devik/qos/htb/">Hierarchical Token
Bucket</ulink>) to perform traffic shaping on a linux machine.
Bucket</ulink>) to perform traffic shaping on a Linux machine.
</para>
<para>
This tutorial is intended for systems administrators who have
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<note>
This article is neither comprehensive nor authoritative. The
<para>This article is neither comprehensive nor authoritative. The
author solicits positive and negative feedback at &email;. Corrections,
additions, and further examples are always welcome.
additions, and further examples are always welcome.</para>
</note>
</para>
<section id="intro-tc">