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LDP/howto/docbook/Windows-Newsreaders-under-Linux-HOWTO.xml

@@ -15,10 +15,16 @@
        </affiliation>
      </author>
 
-     <pubdate>2004-01-24</pubdate>
+     <pubdate>2004-01-26</pubdate>
 
      <!-- Most recent revision goes at the top; list in descending order -->
      <revhistory>
+       <revision>
+          <revnumber>2.21</revnumber>
+          <date>2004-01-26</date>
+          <authorinitials>dq</authorinitials>
+          <revremark>Updated with more clear language as to what exactly would go wrong with older versions of Wine under more recent Linux setups.</revremark>
+       </revision>
        <revision>
           <revnumber>2.2</revnumber>
           <date>2004-01-24</date>
@@ -211,7 +217,7 @@ newsreader functions, message threading, multi-part binaries, translations,
 internal multi-tasking, and URL detection. It also has partial support for
 offline data storage, group properties, UI configuration, searching, and
 sorting. It runs with few problems under Linux after almost no extra 
-configuration. 
+configuration, except under Wine versions later than 20030813. 
 </para>
 
 <sect2 id="prereqs">
@@ -237,14 +243,12 @@ download Wine, visit
 <ulink url="http://www.winehq.com/">http://www.winehq.com</ulink>. 
 The version used at the
 time of this writing was 20031212.
-      </para>
-      <para>
 UPDATE (version 2.01): Wine versions later than 20030813 will not work. 
-      </para>
-      <para>
 UPDATE (version 2.2): Wine version 20031212 may be required under more modern 
 Linux setups. There are more problems with this version, and Dialog will not
-work, but older Wine versions will not emulate properly without it.
+work, but older Wine versions will not &quot;emulate&quot; properly without it 
+and will cause a crash upon trying to access NNTP servers. Try 20030813 first,
+and then try version 20031212 if you have problems.
      </para>
   </listitem>
   <listitem>