Added the Translations section, corrected the section number

references in the license, reformatted some xml and removed the
reference to the defunct www.installfest.org.
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</address>
</affiliation>
</author>
<editor><firstname>Simon</firstname><surname>Gibson</surname><contrib>Language Review</contrib></editor>
<editor><firstname>Emma Jane</firstname><surname>Hogbin</surname><contrib>Metadata/Markup Review</contrib></editor>
<editor><firstname>Rick</firstname><surname>Moen</surname><contrib>Language Review</contrib></editor>
<editor>
<firstname>Simon</firstname>
<surname>Gibson</surname>
<contrib>Language Review</contrib>
</editor>
<editor>
<firstname>Emma Jane</firstname>
<surname>Hogbin</surname>
<contrib>Metadata/Markup Review</contrib>
</editor>
<editor>
<firstname>Rick</firstname>
<surname>Moen</surname>
<contrib>Language Review</contrib>
</editor>
<pubdate>2004-06-01</pubdate>
<abstract>
<para>
@ -25,6 +37,16 @@
</para>
</abstract>
<revhistory>
<revision>
<revnumber>1.2</revnumber>
<date>2006-04-12</date>
<authorinitials>EM</authorinitials>
<revremark>
Added the Translations section, corrected the section number
references in the license and removed the
reference to the defunct www.installfest.org.
</revremark>
</revision>
<revision>
<revnumber>1.1</revnumber>
<date>2004-09-04</date>
@ -71,11 +93,12 @@
>
<title>Copyright and License</title>
<para>
Copyright (c) 2003, 2004 Eric Meyerhoff.
Copyright (c) 2003 through 2006 Eric Meyerhoff.
Permission is granted to copy, distribute and/or modify this document
under the terms of the GNU Free Documentation License, Version 1.2
or any later version published by the Free Software Foundation;
with no Invariant Sections, no Front-Cover Texts, and no Back-Cover Texts.
with no Invariant Sections, no Front-Cover Texts, and
no Back-Cover Texts.
A copy of the license is included in the section entitled
"GNU Free Documentation License".
</para>
@ -132,23 +155,44 @@
</ulink>
</para>
</sect2>
<sect2
id = "Translations"
>
<title>Translations</title>
<para>
You are welcome to translate this document into another language but
please see the TRANSLATIONS section of the license for
information regarding your responsibilities.
<para>
Also, please work with the helpful and kind people at
<ulink url="http://www.tldp.org">
The Linux Documentation Project (http://www.tldp.org)
</ulink>
so that you can contribute your translation to the project.
</para>
</para>
</sect2>
<sect2
id = "Disclaimer"
>
<title>Disclaimer</title>
<para>
No liability for the contents of this document can be accepted. Use the concepts, examples
and information at your own risk. There may be errors and inaccuracies, that could be damaging
to your system. Proceed with caution, and although it is highly unlikely that accidents will
happen because of following advice or procedures described in this document, the author(s)
take no responsibility for damage claimed to be caused by doing so.
</para>
No liability for the contents of this document can be
accepted. Use the concepts, examples and information at your own
risk. There may be errors and inaccuracies, that could be
damaging to your system. Proceed with caution, and although it
is highly unlikely that accidents will happen because of
following advice or procedures described in this document, the
author(s) take no responsibility for damage claimed to be caused
by doing so.
</para>
<para>
All copyrights are held by their by their respective owners, unless specifically noted
otherwise. Use of a term in this document should not be regarded as affecting the validity
of any trademark or service mark. Naming of particular products or brands should not be seen
as endorsements. No liability for the contents of this document can be accepted.
</para>
All copyrights are held by their by their respective owners,
unless specifically noted otherwise. Use of a term in this
document should not be regarded as affecting the validity of any
trademark or service mark. Naming of particular products or
brands should not be seen as endorsements.
</para>
</sect2>
</sect1>
<sect1
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>
<title>date, time and duration</title>
<para>
In order to reach the more people, fests should be held
In order to reach the most people, fests should be held
on both weekends and weekdays. The time of day is not
as important as the duration of the fest, which should
be 6 to 10 hours. Here is why:
@ -548,13 +592,6 @@
<listitem>
<para>local computer retail stores</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>
<ulink url="http://www.installfest.org/">
www.installfest.org</ulink> -
although it currently looks inactive
</para>
</listitem>
</itemizedlist>
</para>
</listitem>
@ -938,7 +975,8 @@
>
<title>Legal Protection</title>
<para>
You may want to consider having users sign some kind of agreement before any work
You may want to consider having users sign some kind of agreement
before any work
is performed on their systems. Such a document will make it clear to
users exactly what they can and cannot expect from the installfest.
</para>
@ -1262,7 +1300,7 @@ conditions whatsoever to those of this License. You may not use
technical measures to obstruct or control the reading or further copying
of the copies you make or distribute. However, you may accept
compensation in exchange for copies. If you distribute a large enough
number of copies you must also follow the conditions in section 3.
number of copies you must also follow the conditions in section 4.
</para>
<para>You may also lend copies, under the same conditions stated above,
and you may publicly display copies.</para>
@ -1309,7 +1347,7 @@ Document.</para>
>
<title>MODIFICATIONS</title>
<para>You may copy and distribute a Modified Version of the Document
under the conditions of sections 2 and 3 above, provided that you
under the conditions of sections 3 and 4 above, provided that you
release the Modified Version under precisely this License, with the
Modified Version filling the role of the Document, thus licensing
distribution and modification of the Modified Version to whoever
@ -1489,7 +1527,7 @@ rights of the compilation's users beyond what the individual works
permit. When the Document is included in an aggregate, this License does
not apply to the other works in the aggregate which are not themselves
derivative works of the Document.</para>
<para>If the Cover Text requirement of section 3 is applicable to these
<para>If the Cover Text requirement of section 4 is applicable to these
copies of the Document, then if the Document is less than one half of
the entire aggregate, the Document's Cover Texts may be placed on covers
that bracket the Document within the aggregate, or the electronic
@ -1502,7 +1540,7 @@ aggregate.</para>
>
<title>TRANSLATION</title>
<para>Translation is considered a kind of modification, so you may
distribute translations of the Document under the terms of section 4.
distribute translations of the Document under the terms of section 5.
Replacing Invariant Sections with translations requires special
permission from their copyright holders, but you may include
translations of some or all Invariant Sections in addition to the
@ -1514,8 +1552,8 @@ of those notices and disclaimers. In case of a disagreement between the
translation and the original version of this License or a notice or
disclaimer, the original version will prevail.</para>
<para>If a section in the Document is Entitled "Acknowledgments",
"Dedications", or "History", the requirement (section 4) to Preserve its
Title (section 1) will typically require changing the actual
"Dedications", or "History", the requirement (section 5) to Preserve its
Title (section 2) will typically require changing the actual
title.</para>
</section>
<section