diff --git a/LDP/guide/docbook/LDP-Author-Guide/LDP-Author-Guide.xml b/LDP/guide/docbook/LDP-Author-Guide/LDP-Author-Guide.xml
index 4fc06183..4f1ea268 100644
--- a/LDP/guide/docbook/LDP-Author-Guide/LDP-Author-Guide.xml
+++ b/LDP/guide/docbook/LDP-Author-Guide/LDP-Author-Guide.xml
@@ -163,9 +163,9 @@ what's on the LDP web site as I'm currently *gasp* offline. -->
 	 <revnumber>4.6</revnumber>
 	 <date>2005-01-23</date>
 	 <authorinitials>ejh</authorinitials>
-	 <revremark>Typo in xmlto notes, and book template fixed. Copied information about
+	 <revremark>Typos fixed in xmlto notes and book template. Copied information about
 	 DocBook-capable word processing tools into the "Converting Documents
-	 to DocBook XML" Appendix; and added two new visual editors (Vex and Conglomerate).</revremark>
+	 to DocBook XML" Appendix; added new XML editors; and information about tools to convert other formats to DocBook XML.</revremark>
 	 </revision>
 
 	 <revision>