new version before indexing by Kristin Thomas.

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<book id="index">
<bookinfo>
<title>LDP Author Guide</title>
<pubdate>v3.6 2001/01/10</pubdate>
<pubdate>v3.61 2001/03/1</pubdate>
<author>
<firstname>Mark</firstname>
<othername>F.</othername>
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up to speed and writing. </para>
</abstract>
<revhistory>
<revision>
<revnumber>3.61</revnumber>
<date>2001/03/01</date>
<authorinitials>mfk</authorinitials>
<revremark>
Spelling and grammar changes from Dave Edwards (amoamasam@sympatico.ca)
</revremark>
</revision>
<revision>
<revnumber>3.6</revnumber>
<date>2001/01/10</date>
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url="http://nwalsh.com/docbook/dsssl/">http://nwalsh.com/docbook/dsssl/</ulink></para>
<para>The <indexterm><primary>DSSSL</primary></indexterm>
Document Style Semantics and Specification Language
tells jade (see <xref linkend="jade">) how to render a DocBook document
tells jade (see <xref linkend="jade"/>) how to render a DocBook document
into print or online
form. The DSSSL is what converts a title tag into an
&lt;H1&gt; tag in HTML, or to 14 point bold Times Roman for RTF,

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How much is too much?
How little is too little? That depends on the subject
you chose, your mastery of that subject, and many other
factors. Just keep this admonition in mind, and use good judgement.
factors. Just keep this admonition in mind, and use good judgment.
</para>
</listitem>
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<para>
In a sense, editing is like code review in software development.
Having a programmer review their own code doesn't make much sense,
does it? Why does having a writer edit their own document make
does it? Why should having a writer edit their own document make
any more sense?
So, recruit a friend, or write the
ldp-discuss list to find a volunteer to proofread before submitting
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<listitem>
<para>
<ulink url="http://bartleby.com/141"><citetitle>Elements of Style</citetitle></ulink>
<ulink url="http://bartleby.com/141"><citetitle>The Elements of Style</citetitle></ulink>
</para>
</listitem>