From 33cccc0db93b0dbd98d625ea9186cbda133b57d1 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: appaji <>
Date: Wed, 22 Oct 2003 14:44:49 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] No discussion items. Ispelled, woody rendered, ready to
 publish

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 LDP/ldpwn/20031022.xml | 67 +++++++++++++++---------------------------
 1 file changed, 24 insertions(+), 43 deletions(-)

diff --git a/LDP/ldpwn/20031022.xml b/LDP/ldpwn/20031022.xml
index 9352e3da..1bf41a43 100644
--- a/LDP/ldpwn/20031022.xml
+++ b/LDP/ldpwn/20031022.xml
@@ -19,10 +19,17 @@
 
 <itemizedlist>
 
-<listitem><para>Thomas Miglinci wants to add this <ulink url="www.thomas.miglinci.name/simpad/index.html">SIMpad HOWTO</ulink> to our collection.  Your input is valued.</para></listitem>
+<listitem><para>Thomas MIGLINCI wants to add this <ulink
+url="www.thomas.miglinci.name/simpad/index.html">SIMpad HOWTO</ulink> to
+our collection.  Your inputs would be valuable.</para></listitem>
 
 <listitem><para>Howard Shane has a draft for a <ulink url="http://hshanemd.net/docs/HOWTOS/Webcam/index.html">Webcam HOWTO</ulink> and also appreciates your remarks.</para></listitem>
-<listitem><para>Manoj Warrier proposed a document he'd like to call <ulink url="http://SciLinux.sourceforge.net">Scientific computing with free software on GNU-Linux HOWTO</ulink>.  Since most of our documentation is about GNU/Linux and free software, I'd suggest a shorter name, for starters.  How about <quote>Scientific computing HOWTO</quote>?</para></listitem>
+
+<listitem><para>Manoj Warrier proposed a document he'd like to call
+<ulink url="http://SciLinux.sourceforge.net">Scientific computing with
+free software on GNU-Linux HOWTO</ulink>.  Since most of our
+documentation is about GNU/Linux and free software, How about calling it
+a <quote>Scientific Computing HOWTO</quote>?</para></listitem>
 
 </itemizedlist>
 </sect2>
@@ -41,58 +48,32 @@
 
 <listitem><para>Saqib Ali's <ulink url="http://tldp.org/HOWTO/Apache-WebDAV-LDAP-HOWTO/">Apache based WebDAV Server with LDAP and SSL HOWTO</ulink> is updated, v4.1.2 now contains an SSL performance tuning section.</para></listitem>
 
+<listitem><para>Alavoor Vasudevan updated his <ulink
+url="http://tldp.org/HOWTO/C-C++Beautifier-HOWTO/">C-C++ Beautifier
+HOW-TO</ulink> and the <ulink
+url="http://tldp.org/HOWTO/Kernel-HOWTO/">The Linux Kernel
+HOWTO</ulink>.</para></listitem>
+
 </itemizedlist>
 
 </sect2>
   
 </sect1>
 
-<sect1>
-<title>Happenings in the LDP world</title>
-
-<para>.</para>
-
-<sect2>
-<title>Discussion Summary 1</title>
-
-<para>.</para>
-
-</sect2>
-
-<sect2>
-<title>Discussion Summary 2</title>
-
-<para>.</para>
-
-</sect2>
-
-<sect2>
-<title>News Item 1</title>
-
-<para>.</para>
-
-</sect2>
-</sect1>
-
 <sect1 id="feedback">
 <title>Feedback and Contributions</title>
 
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