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-Thomas Miglinci wants to add this SIMpad HOWTO to our collection. Your input is valued.
+Thomas MIGLINCI wants to add this SIMpad HOWTO to
+our collection. Your inputs would be valuable.
Howard Shane has a draft for a Webcam HOWTO and also appreciates your remarks.
-Manoj Warrier proposed a document he'd like to call Scientific computing with free software on GNU-Linux HOWTO. Since most of our documentation is about GNU/Linux and free software, I'd suggest a shorter name, for starters. How about Scientific computing HOWTO
?
+
+Manoj Warrier proposed a document he'd like to call
+Scientific computing with
+free software on GNU-Linux HOWTO. Since most of our
+documentation is about GNU/Linux and free software, How about calling it
+a Scientific Computing HOWTO
?
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Saqib Ali's Apache based WebDAV Server with LDAP and SSL HOWTO is updated, v4.1.2 now contains an SSL performance tuning section.
+Alavoor Vasudevan updated his C-C++ Beautifier
+HOW-TO and the The Linux Kernel
+HOWTO.
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