Some fixes

LDP/users/Peter-Bieringer/Linux+IPv6-HOWTO.de.lyx

@@ -52,7 +52,7 @@ Bieringer
 <revhistory> 
 \layout SGML
 
-<revision> <revnumber> 0.41.4.de.1</revnumber> <date>2003-05-02a</date> <authorinitia
+<revision> <revnumber> 0.41.4.de.1</revnumber> <date>2003-05-02</date> <authorinitia
 ls>PB</authorinitials> <revremark>Details siehe  
 \begin_inset LatexCommand \ref[revision history]{revision-history}
 
@@ -974,6 +974,16 @@ IPv6 ist ein neues Schicht 3 Transportprotokoll (siehe
 
  vom Januar 1980).
  Seitdem wurden viele Adressen vergeben und Erweiterungen angeregt.
+ Die aktuelle RFC ist 
+\lang english
+
+\begin_inset LatexCommand \url[RFC 2460 / Internet Protocol Version 6 Specification]{http://www.faqs.org/rfcs/rfc760.html}
+
+\end_inset 
+
+
+\lang ngerman
+.
  Hauptänderungen in IPv6 sind das neue Design des Headers sowie die Erweiterung
  der Adresslänge von 32 bits auf 128 bits.
  Die Schicht 3 ist für den Transport der Pakete von Endpunkt-zu-Endpunkt
@@ -1607,7 +1617,7 @@ x
 fe8
 \shape italic 
 \emph on 
-x:  <- currently the only one in use.
+x:  <- zurzeit als einziger in Benutzung
 \layout Code
 
 fe9
@@ -1630,9 +1640,6 @@ x:
 
 Eine Adresse mit diesem Präfix gibt es an jedem IPv6 fähigen Interface nach
  einer stateless automatischen Konfiguration (dies ist der Regelfall).
-\layout Standard
-
-Hinweis: Derzeit ist nur fe80 in Verwendung.
 \layout Subsection
 
 Site-lokaler Adress-Typ
@@ -4388,14 +4395,14 @@ Die 6to4 Adresse wird wie folgt definiert (Schema ist dem
 +---+------+-----------+--------+--------------------------------+
 \layout Standard
 
-FP ist das bekannte Präfix für globale Adressen, TLA ist der Top Level Aggregato
+FP und TLA zusammen haben den Wert 0x2002.
-r.
  V4ADDR ist die weltweit einmalige IPv4 Adresse des Knoten (in hexadezimaler
  Notation).
- Mit dem SLA wird das Subnets identifiziert (65536 lokale Subnets sind möglich).
+ Mit dem SLA wird das Subnetz identifiziert (65536 lokale Subnetze sind
+ möglich) und benutzbar, um die lokale Netzwerstruktur abzubilden.
 \layout Standard
 
-Bei diesem Präfix wird normalerweise mit dem SLA 
+Für Gateays wird dieser Präfix normalerweise mit dem SLA 
 \begin_inset Quotes sld
 \end_inset 
 
@@ -4403,7 +4410,7 @@ Bei diesem Pr
 \begin_inset Quotes srd
 \end_inset 
 
- erstellt und dem 6to4 Tunnel-Interface das Suffix 
+ definiert und dem 6to4 Tunnel-Interface das Suffix 
 \begin_inset Quotes sld
 \end_inset 
 
@@ -4913,7 +4920,7 @@ Dann ist das daraus resultierende 6to4 Pr
 2002:0102:0304::
 \layout Standard
 
-Lokalen 6to4 Gateways sollte immer das manuelle Suffix 
+Lokalen 6to4 Gateways sollte immer das Suffix 
 \begin_inset Quotes sld
 \end_inset 
 
@@ -5124,7 +5131,7 @@ echo
 \end_inset 
 
  können Sie am einfachsten das /proc Dateisystem einsehen.
- Hierfür gibt es aber zwei Voraussetzungen, die erfüllt sein müssen:
+ Hierfür gibt es aber einige Voraussetzungen, die erfüllt sein müssen:
 \layout Itemize
 
 Das /proc-Dateisystem muss im Kernel aktiviert sein.
@@ -10177,7 +10184,7 @@ Wissenschaftliche Publikationen (Kurzbeschreibungen, Bibliographien, Online
 \end_inset 
 
 , Dezember 2002 publiziert von 
-\begin_inset LatexCommand \url[IPv6 Cluster]{http://www.ist-ipv6.org/index.html}
+\begin_inset LatexCommand \url[IPv6 Cluster]{http://www.ist-ipv6.org/}
 
 \end_inset 
 
@@ -10793,7 +10800,7 @@ Aktuelle (auch) IPv6-bezogene Drafts finden Sie hier:
 \layout Itemize
 
 
-\begin_inset LatexCommand \url[Next Generation Transitition (ngtrans)]{http://www.ietf.org/ids.by.wg/ngtrans.html}
+\begin_inset LatexCommand \url[Next Generation Transition (ngtrans)]{http://www.ietf.org/ids.by.wg/ngtrans.html}
 
 \end_inset 
 

LDP/users/Peter-Bieringer/Linux+IPv6-HOWTO.lyx

@@ -52,7 +52,7 @@ Bieringer
 <revhistory> 
 \layout SGML
 
-<revision> <revnumber>Release 0.41.3</revnumber> <date>2003-04-23a</date> <authorin
+<revision> <revnumber>Release 0.41.3</revnumber> <date>2003-04-23</date> <authorin
 itials>PB</authorinitials> <revremark>See  
 \begin_inset LatexCommand \ref[revision history]{revision-history}
 
@@ -400,7 +400,6 @@ German
 
 With 2002-11-10 a German translation was started by Georg Käfer <gkaefer
  at gmx dot at> and the first public version was published 2003-02-10.
- Taken source: CVS-version 1.53 of LyX file = howto version 0.39.2.
  It's originally available on Deep Space 6 at 
 \begin_inset LatexCommand \url[http://mirrors.deepspace6.net/Linux+IPv6-HOWTO-de/]{http://mirrors.deepspace6.net/Linux+IPv6-HOWTO-de/}
 
@@ -413,8 +412,14 @@ With 2002-11-10 a German translation was started by Georg K
 French
 \layout Standard
 
-With 2003-04-09 a French translation was started and is still in progress
+With 2003-04-09 a French translation was started by Michel Boucey <mboucey
- by Michel Boucey <mboucey at free dot fr>.
+ at free dot fr> and the first public version was published 2003-05-04.
+ It's originally available on Deep Space 6 at 
+\begin_inset LatexCommand \url[http://mirrors.deepspace6.net/Linux+IPv6-HOWTO-fr/]{http://mirrors.deepspace6.net/Linux+IPv6-HOWTO-fr/}
+
+\end_inset 
+
+.
 \layout Section
 
 Technical
@@ -951,7 +956,7 @@ Basics
 What is IPv6?
 \layout Standard
 
-IPv6 is a new layer 3 transport protocol (see 
+IPv6 is a new layer 3 protocol (see 
 \color red
 
 \begin_inset LatexCommand \url[linuxports/howto/intro_to_networking/ISO - OSI Model]{http://www.linuxports.com/howto/intro_to_networking/c4412.htm#PAGE103HTML}
@@ -968,6 +973,12 @@ IPv6 is a new layer 3 transport protocol (see
 
  from January 1980) and since its inception, there have been many requests
  for more addresses and enhanced capabilities.
+ Latest RFC is 
+\begin_inset LatexCommand \url[RFC 2460 / Internet Protocol Version 6 Specification]{http://www.faqs.org/rfcs/rfc760.html}
+
+\end_inset 
+
+.
  Major changes in IPv6 are the redesign of the header, including the increase
  of address size from 32 bits to 128 bits.
  Because layer 3 is responsible for end-to-end packet transport using packet
@@ -1584,9 +1595,6 @@ x:
 
 An address with this prefix is found on each IPv6-enabled interface after
  stateless auto-configuration (which is normally always the case).
-\layout Standard
-
-Note: only fe80 is currently in use.
 \layout Subsection
 
 Site local address type
@@ -1995,9 +2003,9 @@ Automatically computed (also known as stateless)
 With auto-configuration, the host part of the address is computed by converting
  the MAC address of an interface (if available), with the EUI-64 method,
  to a unique IPv6 address.
- If no MAC address is available (happens e.g.
+ If no MAC address is available for this device (happens e.g.
- on virtual devices), something else (like the IPv4 addresses or the MAC
+ on virtual devices), something else (like the IPv4 address or the MAC address
- address of a physical interface) is used instead.
+ of a physical interface) is used instead.
 \layout Standard
 \align left 
 Consider again the first example 
@@ -4267,13 +4275,13 @@ The 6to4 address is defined like following (schema is taken from
 +---+------+-----------+--------+--------------------------------+
 \layout Standard
 
-Where FP is the known prefix for global addresses, TLA is the top level
+FP and TLA together (16 bits) have the value 0x2002.
- aggregator.
  V4ADDR is the node's global unique IPv4 address (in hexadecimal notation).
- SLA is the subnet identifier (65536 local subnets possible).
+ SLA is the subnet identifier (65536 local subnets possible) and are usable
+ to represent your local network structure.
 \layout Standard
 
-Such prefix is generated and normally using SLA 
+For gateways, such prefix is generated by normally using SLA 
 \begin_inset Quotes sld
 \end_inset 
 
@@ -4289,7 +4297,7 @@ Such prefix is generated and normally using SLA
 \begin_inset Quotes srd
 \end_inset 
 
- assigned to the 6to4 tunnel interface.
+ and assigned to the 6to4 tunnel interface.
 \layout Subsubsection
 
 6to4 upstream tunneling
@@ -4767,7 +4775,7 @@ the generated 6to4 prefix will be
 2002:0102:0304::
 \layout Standard
 
-Local 6to4 gateways should always assigned the manual suffix 
+Local 6to4 gateways should always assigned the suffix 
 \begin_inset Quotes sld
 \end_inset 
 
@@ -5020,7 +5028,7 @@ echo
 \begin_inset Quotes srd
 \end_inset 
 
- is the simplest way to access the /proc filesystem, but two requirements
+ is the simplest way to access the /proc filesystem, but some requirements
  are needed for that
 \layout Itemize
 
@@ -5309,7 +5317,7 @@ In IPv6 you can't control forwarding per device, forwarding control has
 
  for more).
  This is different to IPv4, where you are able to control forwarding per
- device (decission is made on interface where packet came in).
+ device (decision is made on interface where packet came in).
 \layout Standard
 
 This also sets all interfaces' Host/Router setting 'forwarding' to the specified
@@ -5868,7 +5876,7 @@ icmp_*
 \layout Standard
 
 This control settings are not used by IPv6.
- To enable ICMPv6 rate limting (which is very recommended because of the
+ To enable ICMPv6 rate limiting (which is very recommended because of the
  capability of ICMPv6 storms) netfilter-v6 rules must be used.
 \layout Subsection
 
@@ -6909,8 +6917,8 @@ Be sure that IPv6 is loaded, either because it is compiled into the kernel
 \layout Enumerate
 
 Configure your interface.
- Here we assume eth0 and RIR address (3ffe::).
+ Here we assume eth0 and address (3ffe:ffff:1234:5::1:1).
- Edit /etc/network/interfaces :
+ Edit /etc/network/interfaces:
 \layout Code
 
 iface eth0 inet6 static
@@ -9941,7 +9949,7 @@ Science Publications (abstracts, bibliographies, online resources)
 \end_inset 
 
 , December 2002 published by 
-\begin_inset LatexCommand \url[IPv6 Cluster]{http://www.ist-ipv6.org/index.html}
+\begin_inset LatexCommand \url[IPv6 Cluster]{http://www.ist-ipv6.org/}
 
 \end_inset 
 
@@ -10551,7 +10559,7 @@ Current (also) IPv6-related drafts can be found here:
 \layout Itemize
 
 
-\begin_inset LatexCommand \url[Next Generation Transitition (ngtrans)]{http://www.ietf.org/ids.by.wg/ngtrans.html}
+\begin_inset LatexCommand \url[Next Generation Transition (ngtrans)]{http://www.ietf.org/ids.by.wg/ngtrans.html}
 
 \end_inset