diff --git a/LDP/ldpwn/20031008.xml b/LDP/ldpwn/20031007.xml
similarity index 80%
rename from LDP/ldpwn/20031008.xml
rename to LDP/ldpwn/20031007.xml
index 12103833..b8f71196 100644
--- a/LDP/ldpwn/20031008.xml
+++ b/LDP/ldpwn/20031007.xml
@@ -26,14 +26,19 @@
 <sect2>
 <title>Proposed new documents</title>
 
-<para>This section would have been empty again if it wasn't for the initiative of your weekly news editors:</para>
+<para>This section would have been empty again if it wasn't for the
+initiative of your weekly news editors ;-)</para>
 
 <itemizedlist>
 
-<listitem><para>We decided to support Sergiusz Pawlowicz's proposal for a <ulink url="http://tldp.org/ldpwn/latest.html#AEN63">HOWTO stand up and turn off TV</ulink>.  We would like this document to be a joined effort, and since you've had some time to think about it, we gatter that by now you probably have to refrain yourselves from picking up the telephone and calling us to share your ideas ;-)   
+<listitem><para>We decided to support Sergiusz Pawlowicz's proposal for
+a <ulink url="http://tldp.org/ldpwn/20030930.html#AEN63">HOWTO stand up
+and turn off TV</ulink>.  We would like this document to be a joint
+effort, and since you've had some time to think about it, we gatter that
+by now you probably have to refrain yourselves from sending in a mail to
+us to share your ideas ;-)
 </para></listitem>
 
-
 </itemizedlist>
 </sect2>
 
@@ -114,21 +119,16 @@
 <title>Feedback and Contributions</title>
 
 <para>The Linux Documentation Project (TLDP) is working on developing
-free, high quality documentation for the GNU/Linux operating system. You
-can help TLDP by: Reviewing one of the draft versions of the <ulink
-url="http://www.tldp.org/authors/inprogress.html">documents in
-progress</ulink>, or picking up one of the <ulink
-url="http://www.tldp.org/authors/unmaint.html">unmaintained
-documents</ulink> and reviving it or providing assistance with <ulink
-url="http://www.tldp.org/authors/markup.html">markup</ulink>. You are
-welcome to participate in TLDP discussions by joining
-<email>discuss-subscribe@en.tldp.org</email>. Announcements about TLDP
-are made at <email>announce-subscribe@en.tldp.org</email>.</para>
+free, high quality documentation for the GNU/Linux operating system.
+Announcements about TLDP are made via
+<email>announce-subscribe@en.tldp.org</email>. If you want to help TLDP,
+take a look at the <ulink url="http://www.tldp.org/authors/">tasks
+page</ulink>, and consider joining
+<email>discuss-subscribe@en.tldp.org</email>.</para>
 
-<para>Help us create this weekly newsletter. We need volunteers who
-follow the community (mailing lists, newsgroups, web channels) and
-report events related to The Linux Documentation Project. Please update
-us by sending in the information and links to
+<para>Help us create this newsletter. We need volunteers who follow the
+community (mailing lists, newsgroups, web channels) and report events
+related to free software documentation. Write to us at
 <email>feedback@en.tldp.org</email>.</para>
 
 <para>LDP Weekly News is compiled and edited by
@@ -138,3 +138,4 @@ with help from several other people.</para>
 </sect1>
 
 </article>
+