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apparently, DocBook is quite picky about the order of children elements within the <affiliation/> element; so rearranged; and also only one of <revremark/> or <revdescription/> is (technically) allowed in a <revision/>, so I chose to convert the <revremark/> elements to <remark/> and drop them inside of a <revdescription/>, which allows much richer expression of content
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<surname>Alkalay</surname>
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<orgname>IBM Linux Impact Team :: <ulink url="http://ibm.com/linux">ibm.com/linux</ulink></orgname>
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<orgdiv>Senior IT and Software Architect :: Linux Market Developer</orgdiv>
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<email>avi at br.ibm.com</email>
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<email>avi at unix.sh</email>
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<orgdiv>Senior IT and Software Architect :: Linux Market Developer</orgdiv>
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<orgname>IBM Linux Impact Team :: <ulink url="http://ibm.com/linux">ibm.com/linux</ulink></orgname>
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<revnumber>2.1</revnumber>
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<date>24 Aug 2002</date>
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<authorinitials>avi</authorinitials>
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<revremark>Rewrite of the /opt /usr/local section.</revremark>
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<revremark>Cosmetics on graphical user interface and plugins sections.</revremark>
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<remark>Rewrite of the /opt /usr/local section.</remark>
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<revremark>Fixed screens and programlistings width.</revremark>
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<remark>Cosmetics on graphical user interface and plugins sections.</remark>
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