xmllint suggested validation corrections

apparently, DocBook is quite picky about the order of children elements within
the <affiliation/> element; so rearranged; and also only one of <revremark/>
or <revdescription/> is (technically) allowed in a <revision/>, so I chose to
convert the <revremark/> elements to <remark/> and drop them inside of a
<revdescription/>, which allows much richer expression of content
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<firstname>Avi</firstname>
<surname>Alkalay</surname>
<affiliation>
<orgname>IBM Linux Impact Team :: <ulink url="http://ibm.com/linux">ibm.com/linux</ulink></orgname>
<orgdiv>Senior IT and Software Architect :: Linux Market Developer</orgdiv>
<address>
<email>avi at br.ibm.com</email>
<email>avi at unix.sh</email>
</address>
<orgdiv>Senior IT and Software Architect :: Linux Market Developer</orgdiv>
<orgname>IBM Linux Impact Team :: <ulink url="http://ibm.com/linux">ibm.com/linux</ulink></orgname>
</affiliation>
</author>
</authorgroup>
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<revnumber>2.1</revnumber>
<date>24 Aug 2002</date>
<authorinitials>avi</authorinitials>
<revremark>Rewrite of the /opt /usr/local section.</revremark>
<revremark>Cosmetics on graphical user interface and plugins sections.</revremark>
<revremark>Fixed screens and programlistings width.</revremark>
<revdescription>
<remark>Rewrite of the /opt /usr/local section.</remark>
<remark>Cosmetics on graphical user interface and plugins sections.</remark>
<remark>Fixed screens and programlistings width.</remark>
</revdescription>
</revision>
<revision>
<revnumber>2.0</revnumber>